- It's about you, not just the event/situation (Gabby B)
- Humbling situation (GB)
- Funny, uses humor (GB)
- Easy to follow message, "You don't have to be first"
- Clearly understand the author's characteristics ("good sport")
- Understandable why people would want author around (Z/R)
- Unique story (Z/R)
- Not bragging (Z/R)
- Stop when you need to, don't max out word count just to fill space. (NN)
- Let's the reader in on something personal, like family and values (JN)
- Combine important aspects of life to showcase both (KS)
- New topic (AG)
- Good hook (AG)
- Playful, spirited (JF)
- Short sound-effects only
To be avoided:
- Grammar/spelling: check it
- Don't sound like you haven't moved on
- Focus on you
- Avoid too much dialogue
- Make sure conclusion matches the point of your essay
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