Friday, February 27, 2015

Sports Article Due, Recording, Shattered Glass

Wednesday, February 25, 2015

Feature Article Breakdown & Sports due next time

  • Opening Moments: Peter, Ramsey, Arick, Seth
  • Features are graded and comments are in Google Doc
    • 85, 94, 93, 84, 85, 90 
    • 80, 84, 75, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0
  • Looking at example feature articles in groups of three
    • Hailey Asher Nate
    • Lilly Brian Demetrius
    • Sarah Nichole Hannah
    • Joey Arick Seth
    • Peter Ramsey
    • Josh Julia
  • HW: Final draft sports article is due next time.  If you want me to look at it tonight or tomorrow, please email me and let me know it's in your folder.

Wednesday, February 11, 2015

Feature Article Recording & Sports Introduction

  1. Opening Moments: Peter & Ramsey
  2. Feature Article Recording and Reflection: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xTflTUhTMcF_qVLHVmR67S8L13aWkrpEMrXEmNqgy4Q/edit?usp=sharing
  3. Sports Writing: Vacation HW
    1. Read about the different types of sports writing in Ch 7 and take notes on prepared sheet in packet.
    2. After reading Ch 7, decide which type of article you'd like to do.
    3. Go to sporting event or interview a person for your article

Monday, February 9, 2015

Radical Write Ch 4 & Peer Edit


  1. Opening Moment: Josh B.
  2. Socrative
  3. Radical Write: Separate data from Story
    1. Accompanying Questions
  4. Sharing articles with a peer
    1. Share via GoogleDoc so both can see
    2. Author reads out loud
      1. What else does the reader want to know?  
      2. Is there a "Human Angle"?  How to add for final draft?
      3. Question/Transition approx. 10X
      4. Did you punctuate quotes correctly?

Thursday, February 5, 2015

Transition/Quote model & Senior Projects


  • Opening Moment: Nate S (But I forgot...)
  • Senior Project Packets
  • Ms. P checks in with you about your idea for feature #1
  • Look at feature article from class--> identify the lead, nut graph, Transition/Quotes 
  • The following was emailed later:


Hi folks,

Here are somethings I didn't mention in class:

1-A rule of thumb is the Transition/Quote formula is repeated 10X.  That means you have about 10 quotes you feel comfortable working with (nothing dull or obvious).  This should also give you an approximation of length.

2-Record your interview on your iPad; it's easier to go back and get the exact wording.

3-Hints for interviewing if you are new to it or feeling rusty: http://www.columbia.edu/itc/journalism/isaacs/edit/MencherIntv1.html

4-Do your interview Friday or this weekend so you aren't frantically writing it during lunch on Monday.  It's a rough draft due--but I want it all there in order to tweak it.  

5-Give yourself time to interview someone.  Ask them ahead of time.  Let it start with prepared questions that lead to a natural conversation. 

Best,
Ms P

Monday, February 2, 2015

Feature Work Day #2



  • Opening Moment: Julia
    • Next time: Josh B
  • Learning different styles of Feature Leads
  • Brainstorm Activity
  • Homework to know:
    • On your own, interview for your feature.  Record!   
    • Rough draft due: 2/9 (Monday)
    • Final draft due: 2/11 (Wednesday)
  • Next class: Instruction on layout of a feature article